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Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Poem

Dark 
and Gloomy
Light
and Bright
Unknowingly known
The obvious secrecy that
keeps us apart

We know not the differences that 
we seem
to bear
Only the truth
we seem
to share

A falsehood thats
true



In this poem I chose to focus on three major techniques. Enjambment, Oxymorons, and Rhyme.
I wanted to try to use enjambment because I have never really tried it before! I have written poems before, but I have never known that that was a possible option! 
I also focused on oxymorons because I really enjoy coming up with those! My friends and I sometimes even have wars by seeing who can come up with the most oxymorons! So that was really fun to do.
The last thing that I focused on was Rhyme. I have always rhymed in my poems but I thought I would make it sound more efficient and formal here. I used an inner rhyme because I feel like the ones at the end of the line sound to "Dr. Suess".





Reading Times:

4/8- 30 mins., 4/9- 45 mins., 4/10- 50 mins., 4/11- 30 mins, 4/12- 60 mins.

 

1 comment:

  1. Cool poem, Lily! I especially like the last stanza, which has a paradox and feels a little Macbeth-like to me. Good work with line breaks.

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