I am choosing my literacy narrative to revise. I am choosing this paper because it was the one that I enjoyed writing the most. I also enjoy writing in detail because I can slow down the paper and make it really flow. On this paper the main comment that I got was that I needed to make it more story like. I thuroughly agree with that. I can remember not spending much time on this paper, and I feel that if I spend more time really writing this paper, then I should be able to do just that.
Another comment that I got was that I had repeated mistakes while using commas. I might need to go see Dr. D during tutorial one day to see how we can fix this issue, because most of the time I don't even know I'm using them incorrectly. After I meet with her, hopefully I can resolve that issue. I'm looking forward to revising this paper
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Lily, you still need to identify the two traits of good writing (of the six that we work with) that you will focus on. If you would like to do some more involved study of commas, conventions can be one of them. Think about which trait would connect to making the paper more story-like.
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